After showing our group our first edit of our opening sequence we got feed back by holding a group discussion where we asked them questions.
We received feedback that when we were holding a silence that we held it for too long so to overcome this problem we are adding a sound effect to it to have the effect of time passing but to still keep tension within the audience. We also got feedback that we had a shot where one of our actors messed up and missed the door, so to improve our piece we will cut this when she misses the handle. Finally the music needs to be tweaked as it dropped out sometimes.
As well as negative feedback we also got positive, we found that we have portrayed the genre (gangster) very well as they recognised what we were aiming to produce, and also through out the piece the tension was building which made them want to watch more of the film, also some of the shots we took were good and that placing a shot between the opening and closing of the door it helped show that time was passing.
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