Coursework Treatment Assessment

What Worked Well?
in our treatment when we analysed it we found that the aspects of the conventions we were challenging work well, as we were using a female gang trying to take control over the male gangs, it created a whole new side to the genre of film. Also we found the settings we chose to shoot in were a good choice as they were local and easy to access. we also fond that following some conventions was a good idea as we were using, the black background with white text, a successful recognisable aspect of gangster movies of which many have used before.

How To Improve
to improve our treatment we need to select the correct type of actors to create the atmosphere we need to create and also inside our group we need to delegate jobs to utilise the skills of our members, e.g. Editors, camera people and Directors.

What will I do next?
For the next step in our project I feel that I need to research more English gangster opening sequences that have more of a relevance to the type that we will produce, after this step i think that we need to draw up a story board and start filming.