My idea.
My idea was to start off with action, We would have the main character (The Head Female gangster) extorting a shop owner to pay her protection money to expand her 'racket' (business), as this is a stereotypical 'job' of which male gangsters carry out, this would help the audience recognise what the character is like, how she acts and her aims.
My group feel that I had a good story line and that it would be an effective opening, and that it would be informative and easy for the audience to see what genre the film was. They also felt that it would be a good opening because as it starts off with action the audience will be hoked and want to know more about the characters.
How could it be better?
My group felt that to improve my idea I needed to include more in depth descriptions of the characters (e.g. name and appearance as I did not think of that) further more they thought that it would be a good idea for me to include diegetic or non-diegetic sound to help set the scene, for the diegetic sound they suggested some dialect or the sound of things braking, for the non-diegetic sound they suggested slow ,classical, operatic, religious(Catholic) music,because this type of music is from stereotypical gangster come from (Italy).
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